Looks pretty good as it is but, the action would require a Capital letter and a dot to feel slightly more polished maybe its just me but, having a Cap on the first letter of the line just makes me feel better.
Would play it once it comes out but i'll probably forget because i forget just about everything.
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Thanks ! I hope you do remember to play it :) The text on the action prompts is a stylistic choice, but if it bothers a lot of people I could change, although it would be a pain !
VicariousE
Looks like quite a big project! Has anyone other than yourself tested it yet? And it's definitely an Adult rated game? Other than NG's ad rev payout, you can't get sponsorship for an Adult game here. I know there's at least few other sites out there, that will host sponsored games....
Best of luck, I can't wait to try it!
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Thanks for the response Vicarious :) No nobody has tested it apart from me - if I can host it someplace privately maybe you could test it ? I noticed a glaring spelling mistake in my last project this morning :P And the adult rating; well, like my last game there is no nudity in the web version, but the text is explicit. This allowed me a mature (not adult) rating here. The android version (I aim to host on mikandi ) will have extra adult scenes and stuff. So I'm hoping I can still get good coverage. Not sure about sponsorship via FGL but I'm going to try